I would agree that they should have used a sentence or two from the post. Not the whole thing. The typing sound was crazy fast and did not have a natural feel because they had to cram so many unreadable words in there. Great idea, great look, just too much info in there. Cut it down and it would be very effective.
I have to agree... too much copy and the typing was so fast - i thought the payoff was going to be something funny. oh well. have to give this one an "off the mark."
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Are you kidding? I couldn't read most of that. plus how many viewers are going to work that hard to read all of the copy.
Translation: "I didn't come up with it first so I don't like it."
I would agree that they should have used a sentence or two from the post. Not the whole thing. The typing sound was crazy fast and did not have a natural feel because they had to cram so many unreadable words in there. Great idea, great look, just too much info in there. Cut it down and it would be very effective.
I have to agree... too much copy and the typing was so fast - i thought the payoff was going to be something funny. oh well. have to give this one an "off the mark."
I had no problem with it, in fact, I actually liked it. You get the gist of the typed message without reading the last sentence.
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