Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Wait to Text

A powerful story drives this PSA from Dayton's WDTN:

WAIT2TXT 2016_60 from Harry Boeddeker on Vimeo.

1 comment:

Jon said...

This is very effective. The only two thoughts I have to improve it would be to not use the side cutaway. Just cut to a closer shot of her. I don't want to break eye contact with her. This is intense and when that breaks, it releases some of that intensity. Second, It would be more difficult to do, but I'd love to hear it from her own words. Then cut it together to fit. This is her story, but it's prepared and you can tell.