The pacing in this felt really off. Also. I get trying to build a style with the color but I think using it on every shot made your spot suffer. I think if you use it for a few of the graphics where you really want to drive a message home. That would have worked better in giving you style and still letting your product speak for itself. Just my two cents.
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I liked the start and end of the music, but I wish it went somewhere in the middle. I think it was also competing with the VO.
The pacing in this felt really off. Also. I get trying to build a style with the color but I think using it on every shot made your spot suffer. I think if you use it for a few of the graphics where you really want to drive a message home. That would have worked better in giving you style and still letting your product speak for itself. Just my two cents.
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